First Contact
Crossing the blockade line, the detective entered the scene of the crime. This is a two story house. The dead man laid in the living room, the back of his head looks like it’s been broke from the inside, and the brain and the blood were exposed.
“The deceased is 26 years old, male, we didn’t find any murder weapon on the first floor.” Sheriff said.
“Did you search the second floor?”
“Not yet. In fact, all the policemen are afraid of get into the second floor.”
“Why? Fine, let me do it.”
The detective slowly opened the door of the second floor, everyone was shocked by what they saw with the flashlight. The whole second floor was covered in disgusting drawings. Those drawings were full of darkness and evil, just looking at them made everyone sick. Some of the policemen even screamed, and the sound seemed to awaken something in the darkness.
With the sound of an insect flapping its wings, they found an insect as big as a pigeon was watching and observing them from the dark corner. Those black glowing tentacles and the semicircular wings were all telling human, that creature was not supposed to exist on the earth.
Fear filled everyone’s mind.
BRIEF
So this ratation is about writing a short dark story in about 150 words. And my idea is writing a fanfiction about the Cthulhu Mythos. So I writed a start of a story around The Insects From Shaggai. And my story is about the owner of a two story house called the Shaggai for some reason, however the controled him and one day killed him. The police and a detective came to search, and they found the Shaggai hid in the darkness on the second floor. So the whole story is not that completed, I only focus on the description of atmosphere and the Shaggai.
REFLECTION
As the English is my second language, I understand there are a lot of strange description that are not exist in the normal English grammar. And compare to the original artictle, my description is simple and not enough. I think my writing ability really need more practice in the future.
You can download my PDF about this project here